Sela Locke

“There are no words that can truly do justice to it. Any of it. And that’s why I never say anything. Because people in stories always blurt everything out and ...

Foam sprinkled the sandy shore; a soft sunset-light twinkled along the darkening, rippling sea. A salty breeze brushed along the dunes and danced around the tops of the cliffs, and ...

This is something that came to me a bit ago. It's a rough draft and I know it's not perfect, but I'd much prefer honest criticism to cankerous little nitpicks, ...

Well. Yeah. My name's Sela and I will be your reviewer for...well, I'd say today but you'll probably get other reviewers so--I'll be your reviewer for 12:30 this Saturday afternoon ...

Good morning! I'm Sela, and I shall be your reviewer today. First off, I would like to say this was a sweet love story, despite the tragic ending. The image ...

Hi, I'm Sela! I don't nitpick, and I don't have loads to say, but let's see if I can help you out with this. It was sweet--really sweet, actually. The ...

It seemed the sun was shining extra-bright the next morning when I got up. I dressed quickly, and nearly ran down the hall to the kitchen. All the fighting for ...

The day passed slowly. Thorne had given me more work than ever before, and all over the manor, so I spent half the time cleaning, sweeping and dusting, and half ...

When the nurse – I don’t remember her name – left me alone with my runny eggs and soggy toast, I took the opportunity to study my new cage. There ...

I can see most of the nitpicks have been taken care of, and since your grammar is nearly impeccable, I've nothing to say on that front. I can't believe you ...

The street was dark. The darkness therein was not one wistful, poetic—it was ugly, and thick as a lumpy quilt. There was no one there, and not even the slightest ...

Okay. Is this a fanfiction for the Percy Jackson series, or did you want to start your own version? If it's the former, ask a mod to move this to ...

I liked it, really, I did. The only thing that honestly bothered me--er, the two things, that is, were the dialogue, and the description of the guy. Let's start with ...

It was very...real. That's what I liked about it most. How, even though the wording wasn't always elegant (and good, because it seems to me she's something of a practical ...

Thank you all a ton for your reviews, honestly, I really appreciate it. I just wanted to clear a few things up: More discription of Tommy's outside being (if that ...